Is there anyone who can help me correct my short english essay?

I am excellent with grammar and would be more than happy to help you out. However, you're going to have to e-mail me first, I'm not the greatest with computers and I haven't got the time to figure them out. So e-mail me @ supreme_rebel@yahoo.com and I'll get back to you within a couple days. Probably one day, but give me two just to be safe. So e-mail your essay to me, and I'll help you out.